JO1 Jim Bryant
Figure 3-1.Subject of a personality feature in her environment.
Telling of characteristic mannerisms and actions
Using direct quotations in a characteristic manner
Actually describing the subjects personal
appearance, demeanor, facial expressions and dress
in his or her environment (fig. 3-1)
Giving the opinions of others about the subject
Showing how friends and associates react to the
subject
The following personality feature excerpts should
help you see how some of the techniques are used:
Bryan Tyler of the stations
imaging facility approaches his art
seriously with strong conviction and
knowledge developed by extensive
formal training and much practice.
He does not like photo contests but
has won many. He would rather focus
on the effects of people than photograph
people themselves but does both
well. ...
Tyler is a sensitive artist who why
he takes photographs. ...
I
like
taking
peopleless
photographs that relate directly to man
either by content or implication, as
Tyler puts it.
During
a
tour
of
duty
in
Washington, the lanky Virginian worked
primarily with official portraits.
It can be frustrating shooting
portraits, emphasizes Tyler as he
strokes his bushy black hair. Everyone
dressed the same with his only identity
worn on his sleeve and placed in the
same sterile environment. The portraits I
keep, and feel satisfied with, show
people in their own environment, or in a
meaningful
situation,
hopefully
conveying
some
insight
into
the
subject.
In Petty Officer Tyler, I think we
have one of the Navys finest, said his
commanding
officer,
Capt.
Rose
Grosbeak. Theres not one person here
who doesnt feel that way about Bryan.
Tyler
finds
stimulation
and
excitement
in
searching
for
and
producing
meaningful
photographs,
even in the most mundane jobs. ...
Photography should never end,
Tyler reflects. All you should do is
change
subjects
and
fulfill
some
meaningful purpose, either to me or to
the person for whom I am shooting.
The material presented here gives the beginning
feature writer a start in the right direction. Writing
courses, taken from time to time, can help. Criticism
from experienced feature writers and editors is a great
aid. Studying the work of other writers, as mentioned
earlier, is a fine guide to improvement. Reading about
writing alone, however, never taught anyone to write.
Like the disciplines of newswriting, the art of feature
writing is learned by doing by writing.
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