before you begin to write. A plan of some kind is
necessary to make sure you have included everything
you intended to include and have arranged things in a
clear and orderly way. Whether you outline the letter
completely, make brief notes or carry your plan in your
mind will depend upon the length of the letter and your
own methods of working.
Purpose
Planning cannot begin without a clear purpose. Your
first step is to be sure you understand exactly what the
letter is intended to do. Preparing a statement on the
subject of the letter will help you clarify the purpose and
furnish guidelines for what is needed and what should
be omitted.
It is possible for a letter to deal with more than one
subject, but usually this is not advised unless the subjects
are closely related. A reply on one subject may be
prepared in hours, whereas days or weeks may elapse
before an appropriate answer can be made on another
subject. If both questions are asked in the same letter,
confusion is likely to result. Furthermore, one depart-
ment of the recipient command may prepare the reply
on one subject and a different department on another.
So, even though you have to write several letters to the
same command on the same day, it is better for you to
do so than to combine unrelated matters.
The following are some common purposes
letters:
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To request permission or authorization to act
To request that action be taken
To supply information or instructions
To reply to a request for permission or authoriza-
tion to act
To reply to a request that action be taken
To reply to a request for information
While not every letter you draft will fall into one of
the previous categories, the categories do serve as
examples of how to analyze and plan a letter. For
instance, when the purpose is to request something, you
must be certain the request is definitely and clearly
stated. Usually, there should also be a statement as to
why the request is being made and any additional
explanation or suggestions that are required or
appropriate.
When a Navy form letter is written in reply, the
receipt is sometimes acknowledged, not only by citing
the letter as a reference but in the body of the reply. If a
request has been made, the most important thing in the
reply is a clear statement as to whether the request is
granted or denied Further explanation, limitations or
suggestions should be included as appropriate. Long
letters may need a summarizing statement as the final
paragraph.
Organization
The order the various parts of the letter are arranged
in should be planned with the reader in mind. A letter of
request, for instance, may begin with the request itself,
followed by an explanation of why the request is made.
However, sometimes it may be clearer to the reader if
the letter begins with a discussion of the situation and
leads up to the request. A letter of reply frequently begins
by acknowledging the letter received. It is important for
you to do the following: (1) see the body of the letter as
a succession of units, (2) arrange these units in what
seems the most satisfactory order, (3) complete each
unit before moving on to the next and (4) maintain
continuity by providing a transition from one unit to
another.
In letters of average length, each important unit may
be one paragraph, although there is no rule about this,
For example, an explanation of reasons why something
should be done may take more than one paragraph.
Some letters, on the other hand, maybe so simple that
one paragraph is enough for the entire body. Just as each
letter has a subject, each paragraph covers a topic or
subtopic. Each paragraph has its own order structure so
that one idea naturally leads to another and one
paragraph leads to another.
Word Selection
Choosing the right words is a long step toward good
style. The best words are those that are precise in
meaning, suited to the intended reader, and as short,
simple and direct as possible.
Words can miss the mark of exactness in several
ways. One of the most obvious is choosing the wrong
word from two that sound or look alike. How often have
you read, He was appraised of the situation. . .? It
probably would have been better in the first place simply
to have said, He was told of the situation... but in
any event, the writer should have known that to tell is to
apprise, and to appraise means to evaluate.
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