Do you always make the correct choice between the
following words:
affect, effect; eminent, imminent;
counsel, council, consul; adapt, adopt; principal,
principle; capitol, capital? You may think of some of
these as spelling problems, but they also involve
knowledge of meanings. If you have trouble with any of
them, you should consult the dictionary. As you become
better acquainted with meanings, you will find ways of
remembering them, like the following for principal and
principle:
l Principal means main or the main one
The principal of the school
Payment of principal and interest
Principal and alternate appointments to the
U.S. Naval Academy
The principals in the play have the main roles
His principal objections to the plan are . . .
l Principle means rule or theory
He lives according to his principles
The principles of democracy
He understands it in principle
In other words, whenever you can substitute
main, you spell it principAL. If you can substitute
ruLE, you spell it principLE. This kind of device
for remembering is sometimes of help, but beware of
establishing a system too hastily, because it may steer
you wrong.
Among words that are related or similar in meaning,
the discriminating writer usually finds that one suits his
purpose better than another. Take the words obtain,
procure and secure, for example. Obtain is the more
general term. Procure has, in the Navy, a specific
connotation of obtaining material through official
channels and by approved supply procedures, usually
for someone else, as The supply officer procured the
boiler parts, Secure is often wrongly used instead of
obtain or procure. Its specialized Navy use, meaning
to fasten something down or make it firm, is the connect
clue to its general meaning. When you say He secured
it, meaning he obtained it, you are implying that he got
it against competition and then held on to it firmly or
pinned it down in some fashion. If that is not what you
mean, you should use obtained.
Although you might say that a sailors billet is his
job, you cannot correctly use the word billet in every
instance where you would use job. While fewer and less
seem much alike in meaning, fewer describes number,
and less describes quantity: fewer UA cases; a ship
drawing less water.
In choosing words, always keep the person in mind
for whom the letter is intended. For example, when you
prepare a letter to a command senior to yours, Your
attention is invited is used rather than Attention is
directed; and can be maintained is used instead of
shall be maintained.
A directive addressed to all hands is written in
language all can understand. This does not necessarily
mean that only one-syllable words are used, but it does
mean that the words chosen must be meaningful to all
hands. How would you like to read a notice that began
like this:
Having cognizance of our rigid operating
schedule, the commanding officer, in an attempt to
ameliorate morale, is endeavoring to ascertain the
proclivities of those personnel who are
encountering difficulty. . .
Paragraph Organization
A well-written paragraph has unity, meaning the
ideas it contains are closely related and are arranged to
develop a single topic or subtopic of the general subject.
In modern official letter writing, the tendency is toward
short paragraphs for the sake of readability. This
requires not only that all unnecessary verbiage be pared
away, but also that the subject matter be very carefully
organized and subdivided.
THE TOPIC SENTENCE. A fairly long para-
graph is frequently made more effective if introduced
by a topic sentence. Such a sentence makes a general
statement that is developed in greater detail in the
remainder of the paragraph. Below is an example
adapted from a Navy publication.
Our commanders on foreign soil have more
experience in the arena of international law and
international relations than any governmental
group, with the exception of State Department
personnel. The commander in Korea is operating
under an international organization, the United
Nations, carrying out or enforcing an armistice or
truce. If he is unfamiliar with its provisions, its
implications, and its legal significance in the
international community, he will be hard pressed to
fulfill the responsibilities placed upon his shoulders.
The commander at Guantanamo Bay, Cuba, must
know the terms of the two treaties and the lease
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