Feature and Novelty LeadsAlthough the summary lead is the simplest, safestand strongest of all leads used in straight newswriting,most media like to add a little variety when leading intoa story. Feature leads are a vital part of newspaperwriting. The feature lead permits you to take a mundanestraight news piece and transform it into a story thatcaptures the interest and empathy of the readers.Novelty leads differ from summary leads in thatthey make no attempt to answer all of the five Ws andthe H. As the name implies, novelty leads are novel.They use different writing approaches to presentdifferent news situations to attract the reader’s attentionand arouse curiosity.Feature leads must fit the mood of the story. If youintend to set a particular mood or point of view in a story,your intent or tone should be set at the beginning of thestory.If the situation presents itself in which a novelty leadwould be appropriate, by all means use it. Do not getinto the habit, however, of trying to write a novelty leadfor every story, because they are not always adaptableto every situation. It is easy for the unusual to becomecommonplace if it is seen or heard too often. Noveltyleads lose their effect if they are overused.Figure 2-7 presents various examples of noveltyleads most commonly used in newswriting. Althoughthe eight types described are the ones most commonlyused, it is a mistake for you to assume that all news leadsmay be categorized by type or classification. Theirnames are not important anyway. To the JO, the abilityto write is more important than the ability to categorize.Identity and AuthorityThere are two other considerations to keep in mindwhen you are preparing news leads — identity andauthority. In most local stories, especiallyhomeowners, it is necessary to identify persons frilly inthe lead.For example, suppose you prepared a hometownstory on a sailor who formerly resided in Louisville, Ky.Not being very experienced, you turn in a lead like thefollowing:“Navy Seaman Eugene M. Brainerreported for duty Feb. 16 aboard theguided-missile cruiser USS Hinkle,now operating in Western Pacificwaters.”Although you have answered all the Ws and Hexcept why and how (in this case unnecessary), yourlead is still incomplete. The story is meaningless untilyou identify Brainer as being from Louisville. Eventhen, an editor of a Louisville newspaper will want alocal angle on the sailor. The only angle available to youis the name of Brainer’s parents and their home address.You must, therefore, identify Brainer more fully inyour lead. It is unlikely that many of the newspaper’sreaders would know him merely by name, and a city thesize of Louisville might have more than one Eugene M.Brainer. To localize the story and to avoid confusion ormisinterpretation, you would include moreidentification. The lead should be written in thefollowing way:“A Kentucky native, SeamanEugene M. Brainer, son of Mr. and Mrs.Mack Brainer of 70 N. Williams St.,Louisville, reported for duty Feb. 16aboard the guided-missile cruiser USSHinkle, a unit of the Navy’s SeventhFleet in the Pacific”As you can see, complete identification of a personin the lead sometimes makes that lead long andcumbersome. Yet, it cannot be avoided in hometownstories where identity is more important than the action,especially if the action is weak, as it is in the precedingexample.In many instances, however, full identification isunnecessary or impractical for inclusion in the lead. Ingeneral, complete lead identification is unnecessary andshould be avoided when one or more of the followingpoints is true:The action overshadows the person or personsinvolved.There are too many persons involved to identifyall of them by name and rate.‘The identification does not mean much to thereaders in a particular area.The “who” is a prominent, widely known figure.When an individual is not fully identified in the lead,that person must be identified by name, rank or rating,title, duty station and possibly hometown addresselsewhere in the story. This identification is alsoimportant for places and things in a story. If you use thename of an unfamiliar town or city in a story, at leastidentify it by the state in which it is located. If you use2-15
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